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Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

Your poem feels less like a story and more like an ancient lament carried by wind and stone. I was especially moved by “this place has no mourners / only hush and broken stone.” That image holds so much grief without ever needing to explain it. Thank you for sharing such a haunting and deeply atmospheric piece.

Ramona Moth's avatar

Stunning

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